Hey everyone! I've recently gotten back into creative writing, and I wanted to share some of my pieces with all of you! I will hopefully update this as I continue to write more. Thank you for taking the time to read! ❤️️
Wonderful job on both, Asteria! I do think that even though it is a short story, you should pace things out a little more. Explain the scene and everything around it, but leave an air of curiosity to the reader. Otherwise, everything was really nicely done. I can't wait to read more of what you make! :3
Thank you so much! I wrote both of these for my creative writing class, so I unfortunately had a word limit. Otherwise, the plots would be fleshed out more. :)
Posted on 2017-3-9 21:37